Hi Beth, Kim and Andy, we3ll done on your preliminary production. I think you worked well together as a group and that you've learned a lot from the process.
Your idea was interesting and original; food magazines are usually aimed at a much older audience. Your images and content address a student audience appropriately, and you show technical skill and attention to detail, especially on the cover with the female model. Well done.
The other cover and the contents page seem a little unfinished - perhaps because you rushed them after spending a lot of time on the first cover. However, you still show a sound understanding of genre conventions.
Overall, I would give this is B/C grade. I hope you enjoyed creating the product and feel that this has prepared you for your main production, which will start in a few weeks.
Hi Beth, Kim and Andy,
ReplyDeletewe3ll done on your preliminary production. I think you worked well together as a group and that you've learned a lot from the process.
Your idea was interesting and original; food magazines are usually aimed at a much older audience. Your images and content address a student audience appropriately, and you show technical skill and attention to detail, especially on the cover with the female model. Well done.
The other cover and the contents page seem a little unfinished - perhaps because you rushed them after spending a lot of time on the first cover. However, you still show a sound understanding of genre conventions.
Overall, I would give this is B/C grade. I hope you enjoyed creating the product and feel that this has prepared you for your main production, which will start in a few weeks.
Well done again,
Kate